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"Ugh, do I really have to go?"

"Yes! Now hurry up and put your damn bikini on. We have to leave early if we want to snag a good spot at the beach."

You groaned again in annoyance as your American friend Alfred was convincing you into another one of his fun trips. The last time you went with him on one of those trips, you ended up lost in some downtown area cold and alone. But, anyways, back to the story right?

Another groan slipped from you as you yanked the small stringed bikini from his hands and headed off to the restroom. Why you ever agreed to this, you had no idea, but something told you that it was a sure fire recipe for disaster. Alfred had told you he had also invited a couple of his other friends and that they were tagging along as well. You've only met some of his proclaimed friends and they seemed nice. Well, all except for his one promiscuous friend, Francis. Francis got under your skin more than the rest because he made flirtatious advances towards you non-stop. But, then again, he made advances at nearly anything that walked and talked.

With the stringed bikini in hand, you leisurely slipped out of you casual clothes and put on the bikini with ease. Taking a step back, you admired yourself for a minute in front of the large mirror and smiled at the resuts. For a guy Alfred sure had a good taste for swim wear-- way better than his taste for food though.

You threw on a small turqoiuse t-shirt and white shorts over your bikini and walked out to meet Alfred. Alfred turned and smiled at you, but then frowned quickly noticing you covered up the bikini.

"Hey! I didn't buy you that bikini for nothing! Why are you covering it up?" Alfred walked over and tugged at the bottom of your t-shirt. Slapping his hadn away, you couldn't help but snicker a bit.

"Calm down, I am going to take these clothes off at the beach. And besides,--" You nervously tucked your shirt closer to you and sighed. "I'm a bit afraid to be so exposed in front of that damn Frenchie. . ."

Alfred laughed and put an arm around your shoulder.

"Francis? I wouldn't worry about him today. My old friend Arthur is coming too, so he'll keep him in line." Alfred lightly slapped your back and took his car keys and house keys in hand. "Let's go to the beach!"

- - -

When you two finally reached the beach, it looked pretty decent. Not too many people, not too less. You smiled widely and got out of Alfred's car and stretched. Maybe today wouldn't be so bad after all.

Alfred exited his car as well, walking around to the trunk and popping it open with a click. Looking back at him, you saw him grab a cooler and two folded chairs with another small bag tucked under his arm.

"Do you want some help, Alf?"

He smiled and chuckled. "Nope! The hero's got this one, little lady!" He smiled and walked off to go find a proper spot on his own. You stayed back adn closed the car's trunk, making sure he didn't forget anything like he usually did. Before you closed the trunk, numerous of sets of different cars pulled up beside Alfred's. You tried to take your eyes away but couldn't as the people exited from them. Quickly, you realized that it was Alfred's friends as Alfred trotted up and stood beside you.

"What's up guys? Ya' ready to get fucked up!?" You looked up at Alfred with a questioning look and sighed. Patrying was never really your thing so you always chose to stay at home when Alfred offered to take you. Soon, Alfred's friends stood in front of you and smiled. Well, some of them were smiling at least.

One with tied back black hair stepped in front of you and extended his hand.

"Hello, aru. My name is Yao." He smiled and waited for you to shake his hand. Matching his smile, you gladly greeted him and shook his hand. After you exchanged your greetings with Yao, Alfred's other friends started to warm up around you. Another one approached, a brunette man, who looked younger than the rest of them but not too young. He happily walked up to you with closed eyes and a smile.

"Ciao, bella! My name's Feliciano Vargas! But, you can call me Veneziano if you want." A smile appeared on you face as soon as you looked at Feliciano. His bubbly personality and happy nature was very contagious. Before you could give him your name, he quickly wrapped his arms around you in a tight hug.

"Ve~ let's be best friends bella!"

As you awkwardly returned the hug, you nodded. "Sure Feliciano. I'd like that, and you can call me _____."

Feliciano smiled happily and quickly grabbed your hand, leading you towards the beach. "Great! Now let's go swimming _____!"

"Feliciano, stop." Feliciano stopped dead in his tracks as soon as he heard the deep voice. You looked back at the person approaching Feliciano and shivered under his pressence. His tall and powerful stature made you shiver. He poked Feliciano's forehead then switched his gaze on you.

"Hallo, I'm Ludwig. Please excuse my friend Feliciano for being rude."

You shook your head and smiled. "Oh, he's not being rude at all Ludwig."

Ludwig raised one eyebrow at you in question, but shrugged. Before Feliciano could try and drag you off again, another person stepped forward. This time, it was a shorter Japanese man.

"Hello, I'm Kiku. It's nice to meet you _____." You smiled down at the short Japanese man.

"Hi Kiku, and it's nice to meet you too."

He nodded once at you before standing to the other side of Ludwig. After Kiku walked aside, another large man stepped in his place. You looked up at the large man, smiling up at him before waving him.

"Hello, I'm guessing you're Ivan, right?"

Ivan nodded and smiled down in return. "Da, and I'm guessing he has told you of me?"

"Yeah, but don't worry Ivan everything he said was good, don't worry." Smiling at him reassuringly, you lightly punched his arm in a friendly manner. All of Alfred's friends gasped and slowly back away from Ivan, but you couldn't imagine why. From everything Alfred had told you about him, why would they be so afraid? You looked up at Ivan and waited for something bad to happen.

Ivan looked down and chuckled. "Ha ha, that was weak, da?"
Now, I really don't know where I am going with this exactly-- this was originally supposed to be a one-shot written for a friend, but then it sorta' spun into something completely different.

I'm not sure whether or not I should continue this, so chances are 50/50 right now. :dummy:
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TheFandomSister Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student General Artist
Continue pls😭😭
LemonzForLife Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
Lovemerightnow Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Uh yes please
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your icon OMFG
emmalynncat Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im just sitting*coughcough*laying*coughcough* here,like 'wtf did I do?'
emmalynncat Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
//inhales deeply
MORE!!! PLEASEEEEE?? *puppy eyes* 
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014   General Artist
Me: -stands there smiling like a doofus while everyone is waiting for me to be killed-
mirahnorton Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
But I punched lightly in a friendly Manner I wasn't trying so it doesn't count
Nordicgurl4ever Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
"Ha ha, that was weak, da?"
Me: Oh snap! Run!!! Please don't return the punch!!!*runs like the British are coming*
Russia: *stands there with a WTF face*
Asiannomnomlol112 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Please don't return the punch
AnimeGamer1223 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Artist
"Ha ha, that was weak, da?"
anime-manga-freak1 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg, I so want to read more of this! xDD
Kaosu-to-Anaki Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Artist
:iconmoarplz: :iconnaoplz:
2pvs1p Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Please continue
CanadaFan08 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Photographer
This is really good you must cotinue soon. :squee:
Tinaotaku123 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
More! More! More!
alanaisubercool Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
continue this
Yoru-Sasayaki Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE RUSSIA! LOVE! The only thing that could make this better would be Prussia...maybe Switzerland so he can shoot the crap out of stuff. :XD:
kuni-chan978 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Same idea pal! :iconhugplz: *high five*
Yoru-Sasayaki Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YESH! :iconbrohugplz: *returns five-fingered gesture* :iconlikeasirplz:
kuni-chan978 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Yoru-Sasayaki Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am so pleased that I make laugh out loud! :iconregularshowpopsplz:
deserteagle99 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is AWESOME!!! You should TOTALLY continue this!!!:squee:
ScarletMoon-98 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart::happybounce::heart::happybounce: Continue!!!!!!!!!!
HanabiChanx3 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LivingInMyThoughts Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
Hahahahaha!!! "That was weak, da?" Oh wow, that's awesome.
yukiVSkyo Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Please continue, the last line killed me.
CherryPanda22 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"That was weak, da?"
I died via asphyxiation due to laughter. Lordy lordy you kill me, eh! :') Moar, please, because reasons, that's why! Also pie.
Rena-Cicle Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Continue pleaasssee? :3
Darkest-Crystal72 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
romanolover18 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Aw heck no. You did not. Just call me weak Ivan. Well are you gonna say sorry or not? *cries in corner* I am not weak
UntitledHymn Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student
That last part was funny!!!
Me: So you think I'm weak, Ivan?*starts to run and tries to tackle him*
Ivan: Da!*catches me mid-tackle and sets me down*
Me: Aw c'mon you didn't even give me a chance to tackle you!! :(
Ivan: *smiles sweetly and pats head* You never had a chance!

Ahem!! Sorry for random crap up there!..... Loved the story!!! :D
Shirogane1340 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Finish!!!! XD it was weak, Da? ^J^
HidansResurrection Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
continue please!
superdoodler26 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
lol the last part was funny :P good job! im not gonna rush you so take as much time as you need ^-^
Acting-luver Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue it! I'd like to see what happens next!
Charleywren Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Moniposa Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz: xD it's so wonderful~~
shadowscar00 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Artist
Continue!! Please? Its too good and the grammar doesnt suck like some reader inserts by other people! *glares at other people* you know who you are
anna1900 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
please continue it!!
yukiVSkyo Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Please continue!
MochiAlchemist Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Russia: :iconkolbeamplz:

Me: :iconblooddeathplz:
Ink--Rainbow Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ohohoho! is ivan going 2 kolkolkol me?! WAAAARRRGGHHH!!!! XD
Deikus-is-hellbound Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Bluegoldstar12345 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
continue it! :D I likey!
ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
Bluegoldstar12345 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob!:D
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